Iya Ythmir

:D Thank you very much GML, Dustfinger and Riababy for both the critiques and the praises (and the star :o ) I appreciate the time you've given for this little ...

Just something I scribbled some time ago. It's almost been a month and I haven't submitted anything yet... (I feel ashamed :shock: ) So, I surrender this tiny piece to ...

Gripping. This is wonderful and exciting for a first chapter. I suggest more emotions coming from the main character by the time she crashed and afterwards. Somehow, those parts felt ...

Powerfrul. Stunning. Captivating. There isn't much I have left to say, only that your work is a wonderful piece. I like it the way it is formatted since this is ...

Here's a quick review. I turned away from him and shut my eyes and without a word, stepped into the center of the lake, and as I did so, I ...

Wonderful. Simply wonderful. I like the entire story. Since this is the edited version, I don't have much to say. From the beginning, I was instantly sucked into Amy's little ...

First of all, I love your title. It fits the story nicely. Your descriptions are good however, they're not good enough to actually make hearts flutter in anxiety. And... well, ...

Fortunately, someone volunteered to clean all the blood that spilled on the floor.

Wonderful prologue, the action is there, I can recognize it. However, it would be better if I actually felt it. A prologue is an important part of a story too, ...

The Thirteenth Tale by Diane Setterfield. I've only just started but I've seen enough to see that it's very, very good and beautiful.

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

indecisive

Splendour

I've read the book too and it is really wonderful. As I read through it, the words "sci-fi" never even crossed my mind and it almost falls into that genre. ...

Wow. What I really like about this piece is its description. I like the way you described the village, the tears in Dawn's eyes, her wings... And I especially like ...